Divorce Shot

(six word short story contest)

Life after divorce,
                       it is possible.

Reviews

[Jack...]

That is entirely up to you my friend. The pain I know is intense, the self doubt piles up, the tears flow uncontrollably and everything is upside down. Lost, is a word that also comes to mind, but still, the sun rises. It may be hard to see through clouded eyes, but it rises. My opinion would be yes, if that is what you want. Your 6 words have spoken loudly...very nicely penned.

[rhythm&blues]

I am beginning to realize that, I didn't think it possible but it happens slowly but surely. Thank you for your kind words Jack.

[Jack...]

Anytime my friend

[PaintingWords]

I am a young writer and I absolutely love how you put so much emotion into 6 words
marvelous.

[Praveeta]

I hope the following quotes will shed light on your poem.

You have within you right now, everything you need to deal with whatever the world can throw at you. – Brian Tracy

Our life is what our thoughts make it.- Marcus Aurelius


Find a place inside where there's joy, and the joy will burn out the pain.- Joseph Campbell

Love and Light

Praveeta

[Einstein Noodle]

six words and instantly you spark myriad stories for all.. the message i get is one of great strength, courage and resiliency... divorce attempts to destroy them all...even those that are amicable require recovery and new direction..
E.

[Riding the Rainbow]

You're totally right, even if it's painful and you want to die.

[Riding the Rainbow]

You're totally right, even if it's painful and you want to die.

[rhythm&blues]

It does seem like that some days, thank you for your visit Kejara.

[Riding the Rainbow]

you're welcome:=)

[Rita L. Sev]

Great truth and wisdom in these six words! Well done!

[rhythm&blues]

Thank you Rita, glad you enjoyed it.

[Clockwork]

This is one of my favorite six word short stories that I've seen on WC so far. This one gets into the heart of the situation. It shows that broken picture that divorce creates, and then it shows that there is hope for new memories and new growth.

I feel like this would be a good reminder to keep for those tough days. The sort of story you write on the back of a picture or a business card, and put in your wallet when you need that spark of energy for the rest of your day. My parents were divorced when I was younger, and if I had seen this story back then, I probably would have written it in my wallet (with your permission of course).

Much light to you, and thank you for sharing.

[rhythm&blues]

Wow, I'm thrilled by this review, thank you so much. You made my day Clockwork.

[Samuel Jack]

I'm married now, I'd say life after marriage is MORE than possible. I'm jealous, you stand above a vast precipice of adventure and freedom.

Maybe that's just me though.

Great poem considering you were restrained down to only six words.

[rhythm&blues]

Don't be jealous, grass always seems greener, you know what they say. Thank you for your review Samuel.

[Sami Khalil]

As you wish ...Marvelous...:)

[rhythm&blues]

Thank you Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)