I have come to love poetry even through trials and tribulations
it is the call of the wild in the air
whether feast, famine or love and turmoil it still moves to the emotions that drive us all
i think you meant "to the emotions that drive us all" ?
i really like this piece, especially where you say "it is the call of the wild in the air"
just like the dog in Jack London's "call of the wild"
poetry can't really be tamed..it moves and drives us, we do not move and drive it..
and it certainly presents trials and tribulations...it can confound us even as we try to bring it to some kind of order, so that we can understand it and ourselves.
jacob
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you jacob, yes that does sound better, I was lucky I got this one out, haven't written anythin.. read moreThank you jacob, yes that does sound better, I was lucky I got this one out, haven't written anything in weeks.
Hear hear!! Poetry does move us. Applause all around the world of the complications. That's what happenswhen I let my phone 's auto correct write a review
a writer is an untamed spirit, first and foremost...it is why we write, to let that beast out of the cage, to release that pent up feeling and preserve it for posterity...love the way you handled this!
Writing, and poetry, is one of those things that cannot be aptly explained; just like art--two people can look at the same painting and have completely different emotions, feelings, etc. I think that finding what moves you personally is what is important, and it doesn't matter if it adheres to the sterotypical norm, or if so-and-so says that it is good and you should like it. Poetry is all about that feeling you get in your gut when you read words, and you are right, "it is the call of the wild in the air"--untameable, untraceable, unpredictable. An interesting concept piece, and very thought provoking this morning...
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you ever so much Sarah, as someone who admires your poetry, this means a lot to me.
11 Years Ago
*humbled* Thank you so much...this was really good
i think you meant "to the emotions that drive us all" ?
i really like this piece, especially where you say "it is the call of the wild in the air"
just like the dog in Jack London's "call of the wild"
poetry can't really be tamed..it moves and drives us, we do not move and drive it..
and it certainly presents trials and tribulations...it can confound us even as we try to bring it to some kind of order, so that we can understand it and ourselves.
jacob
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you jacob, yes that does sound better, I was lucky I got this one out, haven't written anythin.. read moreThank you jacob, yes that does sound better, I was lucky I got this one out, haven't written anything in weeks.
I really don't know what to say on these 'about me' pages. I'm newly divorced, have recently found poetry and loving every minute of it. I'm a bit on the shy side until you get to know me. My best .. more..