I have come to love poetry even through trials and tribulations
it is the call of the wild in the air
whether feast, famine or love and turmoil it still moves to the emotions that drive us all
i think you meant "to the emotions that drive us all" ?
i really like this piece, especially where you say "it is the call of the wild in the air"
just like the dog in Jack London's "call of the wild"
poetry can't really be tamed..it moves and drives us, we do not move and drive it..
and it certainly presents trials and tribulations...it can confound us even as we try to bring it to some kind of order, so that we can understand it and ourselves.
jacob
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you jacob, yes that does sound better, I was lucky I got this one out, haven't written anythin.. read moreThank you jacob, yes that does sound better, I was lucky I got this one out, haven't written anything in weeks.
Very cool my friend. Indeed, there are many trials and tribulations associated with this fine art, but when the dust settles, the sun always shines through. Very nice.
You explain poetry just as it is - pure art. I love this short piece and the format as well. Your words flow naturally and this is emotional - just how I like poetry to read.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I like your review very much, thank you for reading my poetry.
Poetry is "the call of the wild in the air..." Non-poets might not believe this, but it is so true.
It moves us, and we in turn share what it wants us to say...
Very nice, R&B!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
You are so right Rita, wasn't so long ago I could fit into the non-poet description, now I know bett.. read moreYou are so right Rita, wasn't so long ago I could fit into the non-poet description, now I know better, thanks for reading!
I really don't know what to say on these 'about me' pages. I'm newly divorced, have recently found poetry and loving every minute of it. I'm a bit on the shy side until you get to know me. My best .. more..