Cold Eyes

In the warmth of the sun

there is a shiver in the air

your eyes, the color of old man winter

won't allow the frigid cold to heal

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I like the juxtaposition of the seasons...the summer sunlight and the eyes that are locked in a state of winter. Sad eyes, windows to the very spirit itself, are possibly the most intensely mournful things in the world. This was well put; simple and concise, but well done in that you did not try to overplay the idea. Well done.

[rhythm&blues]

Very grateful for this review, coming from such an extraordinary writer as yourself, thank you.

[spayne94]

Lovely description of the eyes well done!

[rhythm&blues]

Thank you!

[MOON]

Great expression in so few words. The eyes see everything!

[rhythm&blues]

Thank you Moon, appreciate your review.

[Ency Bearis]

A good metaphor, I like the brevity meaningful.

[rhythm&blues]

Thank you Ency, very pleased that you like this one.

[Stella Armour]

the eyes are the window on the world, it feels like something has closed the shutters and will not open again.

[rhythm&blues]

So it seems, the shutters were closed long before anyone realized, thank you kindly for your review.