Stillness

Something about the way the words move

quietly, creeping up on my ears

my soul takes flight for I have found

that simple niche inside my heart

Reviews

[Elizabeth]

Short and simple poem with lots of meaning underneath. Very sweet!

[Ency Bearis]

I like the brevity simply meaningful

[Antoñyo]

Nice and simple but profound capture of this discovery.

[Melanie Genevieve]

This made me all fuzzy inside lol sweet but simple, a really great write! I enjoyed it! Keep it up :)

[rhythm&blues]

Wow that's my first fuzzy, thanks! :)

[Samuel Jack]

This is how I felt when I discovered a bit of a knack for word smithery.

A good, simple poem with warm honesty.

Keep up the good words.

More reviews inbound!

[rhythm&blues]

Thanks so much Samuel, I will visit you soon too, enjoy your weekend.

[quinfinn]

wonderfully expressed, this is a piece of cold reality, which exudes a strange sense of warmth.

[rhythm&blues]

Thank you quinfinn.

[Mjay55]

Simple niche inside my heart

[rhythm&blues]

Thank you for reading.

[Fernando Pessoa]

There is a certain bliss in your words, finding that perfect place of peace. Everything here gave me a beautiful sense of quiet.

If you go, go in peace it makes the flowers sweeter along the path. ~Mike Dolan

[rhythm&blues]

Thank you for the review and including the sweet quote also.

[Jack...]

Simple, sweet yet carrying a very large message. Nice things often come in small packages. Very nice.

[rhythm&blues]

Thank you again Jack, such a talent as yours, I'm elated that you are reading my poems.

[Jack...]

No problem. Just let me know when you write something new.

[Emily B]

i heard once that brevity is the soul of wit

and i believe that finding just exactly the right words and spaces when i build a poem is akin to wordless monks who labored unceasingly for ages in their life's work

[rhythm&blues]

Thank you, is that true, I've never heard that before but I do agree to some extent with that statement. I tend to be brief even in speech, albeit not very witty most of the time.