Unreal

love and pain....

Is love real?

As real we can ever be?

Or not?

As we can never be?

Is pain real?

As real as the wounds that heal?

Or not?

As scars that never heal?

Love can never be real.

As pain can never be unreal.

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think. Hope you guys like it.:)

Reviews

[Zoe_N.]

Wow, your poem left me thinking about that concept again. =)

[A. Amos]

I like your message and good write

[Stefanie Holmes]

I really liked this! Unique spin on something I'm sure everyone has thought about in one sense or another.

~Stefanie

[Shahrier]

the second stanza kinda sounds a little awkward, but the meanings are rooted in your work. it was good over all. :)

[FelicityAllona]

Bravo!!! :)) This is my favorite from all of your poems! :))