Frozen

This just came to me, I don't know, I just felt like it. Please Review!

                                      

 

I am water

Wild, fresh and moving

Bearing the weight of everything

Floating over me,

Living within me,

Fallen at my feet

I am water

 

I am water,

Misty, and dark

Flowing, never ending

Vulnerable and wet

I am water

 

I am water

Now stopped and dead cold

Not moving, stationary

Lost in time

Now,

I am ice           

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[AK]

Awesome poem! I loved the last line, "I am ice"
The poem one a whole flows very well. Loved it! Keep writing,

[Sleeping Maiden]

I love the concept of this. Water is one of my favorite elements beside wind. =) Beautiful this is and you captured water well. Stunning! And the picture goes well with it. Awesome job! =) it flows quite nicely.

[Ray]

interestingly written. I always find it fascinating when something, a substance or an object is personnified. You see things a different way...

[Suditi]

I love the theme.
I also like the elegance with which you put across the thoughts.

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice work, you picked a good subject and presented it well.

[Moonflower]

Love the concept and the imagery, this 'flowed' very nicely. well done.

[Rachael Day]

Really cool idea. Fun to read a poem from the point of view of water. Very unique piece of writing. I like it a lot!

[Southern Cross]

Beautiful and haunting. Superb imagery here.

[Summer'sBreeze]

Amazing poem, Rhea. Truely stunning...
I also love the pic you choose for this. :DD