The Silent Tear

As the leaves rustled through the wind

I walked down to the lane,

With a heart full of sadness

Memories full of pain.

 

Thoughts that distracted me

Bad memories of the past,

Now with a silent tear

I wish no memory lasts.

 

The way I fell down

After thinking so high,

The way all my dreams crashed

That just makes me cry.

 

My dreams are all broken

All shattered like glass,

I don’t want to recall

The memories of the past.

 

Here I go again

Through the same lane,

With a heart full of sadness

Memories full of pain.

Reviews

[Balkaran Sidhu]

emotional write....good use of rhymes

[deepblue04]

this is nice and emotional, me gusta :)

[Cerise]

Awwww...touched my heart..and i loved it..marvellous..i love such poems..very nicely described the repition of feelings..the misery loneliness..very well described..:)

[eglantine]

Hmmm, what if, the leaves rustled the wind?

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to escape memory and pain. I believe we must learn to live with it. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Belinda]

I like that you repeated yourself, it makes it feel more serious, more, on going.

[Amila Jay]

Wow. really got me into your words. was touched. Amazing yet sad poem :))

[Alicia Beavis]

The repetition of the last two lines of the first stanza at the end was clever and completed the piece very nicely.

[Laura Maidah]

Flawless conceptually. One subject-verb agreement issue in the third stanza, last line. Nice poem! Thanks for sharing.