Fireball

This is a poem I didn't write myself, but with my mom and my elder cousin brother. Its a really good memory to me as we enjoyed writing it a lot.

There is a Fire Ball in my heart,

Which wants to pop out of my heart

But my heart is like a cage

Which keeps the fire ball in its place

 

Sometimes I feel I should let it out,

But I think my friends will shout.

I think one day the chains of my heart will be broken,

And the cage will suddenly open.

 

 

I have to take my final decision,

As far as I believe.

My heart is getting weaker and weaker,

Like an autumn leaf.

 

 

Before my heart gives up,

I should let it go.

So that I can be a free person,

Which I was once before.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"But my heart is like a cage
Which keeps the fire ball in its place"
A interesting poem. I had to read a few times. I like the thoughts and the very good ending. Good to release bad things. Weight of disappointment can hold us down. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Really gud piece

[Danielle]

Nice piece of a working collaberation!

[MOON]

Lovely write , great collabaration.

[Soul Fire]

It's so lovely.Great work,all of you!

[Belinda]

I like the way you describe your heart as a autumn leaf when you describe it becoming weak. Its a good way to get your point across. The leaves die and fall, as you feel like your heart is doing. Good read. Sad ofcourse.

[khalid]

i think you would better let the fire ball explode, you wont feel peace of mind and happiness unless it does. nice poem

[Cerise]

Gudness!!..very wonderfully written...your second line..lolz..i have written it just the same in my poem...and here i was wondering where i have seen it..mine too was on heartbreak ..:p..except with no fire balls totally diff manner..but I loved yours and the way you have used fire ball to describe your emotions....wonderful work..:)..specially loved " My heart is getting weaker and weaker,Like an autumn leaf"..:)

[Jolie Blossom]

Aww, I really like it. And the title is perfect :)