Luminous

So drunk on the sun

White light dances in my eyes

Colours smile behind

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

With your brief poem, I am laying on a beach with my eyes clods, drinking in the sunshine and getting high on its rays... What a picture you have painted here, Rhea!

[Celestial Witch Child]

It's so short, and yet packed with imagery. The perfect little scene. Well done. (:

[stars are far]

that was so deep words, held the sun shine in its folds, well done :)