Ruins

Why do I feel like 

This is all that will remain of us?

I, looking at you-

The sun lighting up your eyes when you smile,

The way you laugh-a sound so melodious to me,

The way you draw me towards you,

And the way I restrain myself, 

Because I know that this is not real.

And one day I might just wake up thinking- 

That it was all a beautiful dream,

Too far away to be reached.

Why do I feel like

All that will remain of us,

Is ruins.

Old and broken pieces of 

Something that could never be. 

Ruins of something, that never even got to exist. 

Reviews

[Flutterby aish]

Amazing gurl! Luv it...keep writing. luv ya! :*

[Penny]

Very emotional and beautiful write..

[Author Rucha Joshi]

Sadness and memories!
Rhea this poem is nostalgia and hurt of falling apart, well, at least that's what I feel!
nice work and keep the work going!
Blessed be!

[curvygirlrock]

i love your poem it is awesome

[Autumn Dawn Ridge]

Good work. I like it. I feel like this sometimes, too. I think everyone probably has at one time or another. Keep writing!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

A good piece and really inspiring I thank you for writing it and sharing your thoughts.
It's true at the end of the day people dont realise what they lost until it is gone. And I think your poem shines that through nicely :)
Thanks for sharing your thoughts

[Eve Ola]

toughest part to face harsh truth.. deeply felt..

[annabellee]

This is gorgeous, I really liked it.
you got across your feelings very well.
I liked the metaphor with the ruins as well.
Good job :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"Is ruins.
Old and broken pieces of
Something that could never be. "
Sometime we must face the truth. All that is left are ruins of a kind love. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[TL Boehm]

So often we have been taught that if it looks too good to be true - it is. This poem speaks to that. Well done.