Eyes.

I wonder how, when people look into your eyes

They see everything not very special

They see-  

The normality of the placid browns in your irises

When you don't even realize they're looking

But not the light reflecting a thousand rainbows

When you squint up at the sun

They see- 

Nothing, but that your eyes are closed

When you fall asleep

But don't think about the things you're probably seeing

In the dreams playing behind your eyelids

They see-

The way your eyes seem to spit fire when 

Rage unsettles your mind

But not the long lashes shielding the secrets

You probably hide everyday

Author's Note

I'm not very happy with the title. Any suggestions?

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

The eyes hold many secrets and we are forever looking into someones eyes attempting to figure them out. Well done.

[Lox]

I am thankful I do not review with my mouth for this piece was very breathtaking! I find your work quite addictive. Please don't get it weird. I admire your work, and I hope to see more.

[Aehr]

Thank you. :)

[Jamestown]

This a great write, I enjoyed the the way your brain was thinking through
the possibilities, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Flutterby aish]

Its beautiful like i told you earlier...and so is the person whose eyes have been described! :P kEEP writing girl!

[rashu]

silent eyes : i feel this can be a wonderful title for your poem but eyes is also jolly good..
omg u r just 15 ( 1 yr younger to me) and still you write so beautiful..
i really liked the way u expressed eyes...
i liked every line of this peice..
keep it up:)
all the best :)

[Author Rucha Joshi]

Eyes are mirror to the heart!
so beautiful, I'm speechless!

[junaid altaf]

u know what
u made me proud!
this is your best and the most beautiful envisionment in the form of a poem
you gave the mute eyes a taste of speaking!
wonderful

[Aehr]

That honestly means so much to me! Thank you junaid :)

[junaid altaf]

you deserve that

[Moon]

Eyes are windows to your soul. If you look into someone's eyes you can tell when they are happy and when they are sad. This writing is awesome and I, like others, see nothing wrong with it or the title. Good write Rhea.

[Aehr]

thank you :D

[Moon]

You are welcome

[Autumn Dawn Ridge]

What's wrong with it?!?! It's perfect! I love it!!!!! Don't change anything. Keep writing!

[Penny]

Very detailed and beatiful image you have created in this poem. You have mixed emotion with colours in this piece and made them inseperable.. quality of a great poet. Thanks for sharing