Remember The Roses

Remember The Roses

A Poem by Aehr
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It's from the point of view of a boy. I just thought I'd give it a try.

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Remember when you were twelve,
And were suffering from some disease?
The boy who left you roses, 
Was forever and always me

And remember when you turned sixteen,
And the man you loved broke your heart?
The boy who left you daisies
Was always me from the very start

Oh, and when you turned twenty,
And your Mommy passed away
The one who left you jasmines
Was always me, everyday

And then when you turned twenty four
And married the other man who loved you
I was the one who left you daisies again
And I cried all day under the blue

And then you left the city at twenty eight
I was the man who left you roses at that time
And in the grief of your leaving
It was me who left you that rhyme

Remember me, my love? I was always by your side
But now I see your eyes close
And I just hope you keep me with you
And remember me with this last rose

© 2013 Aehr


Author's Note

Aehr
This is from the point of view of a boy. I really wanted to write from the point of view of a guy once, and I'm glad that I wrote this poem. Again, it's after a long spell...
Reviews are appreciated :)

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What a heartbreakingly beautiful poem, just perfect,,inspired and I love how you took it from the male perspective.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aehr

11 Years Ago

thank you! :D
Skeidmdmf

11 Years Ago

You are so welcome.

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