Familiar Stranger

 

I see you in the stars, I feel you in the rain

I see you in joy, and I feel you in pain

I see you in my dreams, and feel your presence all day,

Standing right beside me, listening to everything I say

You make me feel special, but also like I’m being stalked

 Because I’ve always felt you in every step I’ve ever walked

I just keep wishing I knew who you are

The one I feel in the rain and see in every star

Reviews

[Flutterby aish]

Bahut sahi hai..........it's literally amazing!!!!!!!

[Aehr]

thank you aish :P

[Rahul]

Yeah, it's a nice poem and it's contained so much rhyme. I like your imaginary here that you've well penned. I also appreciated your theme. I was probing something to criticize you but this write's really very nice and there's no mistake here in.
everyline's well penned and last two lines're my fav. one. you wrote it about love and as i saw that the genre of this write's Romance or may be it's New Age...isn't it ? ? ? ?

nicely penned, now i'd love to read your some more stuffs.90/100 :)

[Aehr]

Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it. I believe you were speaking to my friend Flutterby Aish before coming to my profile...

[Rahul]

yes, even she told me about you that you're an amazing writer and she said that she's much good that herself and yes, at an extent she's right...even she's a damn nice writer as well as i saw.
you both are nice one's on their own side...but i'm confused which one's abetter write than both of you...i think if you're 100 % than sorry but as is saw she's 101 % (sorry, not offensive) :P
i think i need to read yur more stuffs to know about you or your thinking...:P
hey, you can add some more lines here in this your write "familiar stranger" if you want, if you expand it more it could be more shining...:P

[Aehr]

Oh well, I'm glad you like my best friend's work as well. And no offence taken. Of course, people have different opinions. That is one of the most obvious and conspicuous facts today :) As for my poem, I intended to keep it short, and I don't really think lengthening my poem will help add to the 'magic' and 'make it shine' like you pointed out. But I appreciate your judgement.
Thank you.