Broken Wings

Can't handle the hate anymore

Really can't stand up to fight it

Don't know any more cheery songs

I really just can't stand it

 

I'm lost in time, and pretty much alone

Just the moonlit nights to accompany me

And the only mansion where I reside

Is a sick, old, sorrowful tree

 

Grey's now my favourite colour

Other hues, my eyes don't perceive

And now I taste just bitter things

From my life, I just want them all to leave

 

My soul is pretty much dead

My heart no longer sings

And all I can do is limp, and cry

This tale of my broken wings

Author's Note

After a full day of watching nothing but youtube as a form of entertainment, this was the only product of the mixed feelings. :)

Reviews

[Serenity Faith]

Very well written, and very relatable too. You've got some powerful words in this, the emotion leaks through effortlessly.

[The Invisible Girl]

This is really good!! :) I really felt the emotions through the wonderful flow of your words! 100/100 Keep it up!

[Lina Grey]

Grey is my favorite color too (x) i like the emotion in this, the strength of it, and, of course, the angelic connotations :) lovely write darling.

[beautiful dreamer]

i like how many of your poems have to do with angels :)

[Aehr]

haha.. lol. thanks

[krish]

great.........rhea...........
"u r now runnig-successfully,
so,my rating about ur's poem become high technically............."

[Sirius King]

Grey's now my favourite colour

Other hues, my eyes don't perceive

And now I taste just bitter things

From my life, I just want them all to leave...

very relate-able write
this is really good!

[Flutterby aish]

WOW..........great work rhea!!!!!!!!!

[Aehr]

thank you, Aish! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Sadness can steal our joy and happiness. I like the use of the broken wing to make the point in the poem.
"And now I taste just bitter things
From my life, I just want them all to leave"
Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Angelic_Dreamer]

I love it its very descriptive,kind of depressing but I love depressing parts in a book,and has interesting words. This is my first book I read that was by u and I pretty much enjoyed it. Keep it up Rhea:)