Longing For Summer

I long for the heat, for the days of May

For swimming in the ocean, for the light of day

I long for the juices, the drinks and the ice

And all the tangy, juicy edibles, which in summer, taste nice

 

I long for bright colours, the sun, and the beach

And the holidays when you don't have to hear teachers teach

I long for the tan, the friends, and the fun

When at ten you can smile, and say 'the night has just begun'

 

I long for the sun kissed days I can spend in the fields

And unlike winter, from the cold, when I need no shields

I long for the quiet starry skies at night

And dandelions and daisies at every single sight

 

I long for the harsh, lingering cold to end

I'm so much more alive in the summer, my friend

I want the breeze and the light to visit again

I miss the long walks in summer down the lane

 

 

Author's Note

I'm missing summer, and I want it to come back!!! lol :P So... I wrote a rhyme on it!
Please, pretty please... review it?

Reviews

[Balkaran Sidhu]

nice work.....so much hope in here

[Danielle]

How nice, know just how you feel, summer needs to be on its way today. Cool poem!

[Aehr]

:)

[Flutterby aish]

I long for the summer
I long for the icecreams
I'm sick of these clouds
Tell the sun to stop hiding
Come out mister n show me the light
I'm sick of the grey and hue less skies!!!!!!
Heheheheheheheheheheh
A really nice poem Rhea........evn i'm missing the summers!!!!!!!

[Aehr]

sahi mei yaar... I hate winters ! :P But the only good thing is that it's your birthday in December :)

[Flutterby aish]

hahaha!!!!!!

[Aehr]

:)

[Southern Cross]

I long for a winter..a cold freezing day
I'm sick of summer and days so like May
Let me see snow,crystals and ice
Getting out of Florida..sure would be nice !!!!
Sorry, I guess I went off a bit there...Loved the poem

[Aehr]

hehe.. you should write one on winter :D thanks, by the way :)

[ROSALIND]

I particularly liked this one as it has a sense of longing for something warm well written and also inspiring a sense of belonging for something brighter

[Aehr]

thank you. Really means a lot! :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

"I long for bright colours, the sun, and the beach
And the holidays when you don't have to hear teachers teach
I long for the tan, the friends, and the fun
When at ten you can smile, and say 'the night has just begun'

I long for the sun kissed days I can spend in the fields"

Gosh, don't we all? I miss summer so much :/ the beach, the feeling of freedom, all nighters, hanging out with people at four in the morning.. I miss it so much. You described the feeling of summer perfectly. Great job with this, it's beautiful (:

[krish]

wow.....very nice.......that;s a spirit ...
u know what i do like + love = enjoy such sort of well writing....
really......it flutters me......whenevr u'll read out my poems' u'll see there my way of writing......this time i wanna give 100/100,coz...it's like my style of writng.....
i liked it......but i too loved it...very nice "RHEA"....
now may be u r following my style of writting........?{kidding}

[Summer'sBreeze]

Ah, how I dream for summer to return also. XD

Wonderful poem, Rhea! :)

[Aehr]

thank you, Summer. Of course, your name is summer, so you light up every place even in the winter, I guess. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too. Winter had just begin. I miss the green forest and warm days. I like your wish in the poem. The cold of Winter make us appreciate the warm days of spring. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Aehr]

:) thank you sir