The Storm

The storm is finally over

And I guess I've failed the test

But I feel alright because I know

What happened is just for the best

 

And though another dream has shattered

I can always try again

Put the puzzle pieces together

In spite of all the pain

 

And there are oceans and rivers between

But I'll try to swim them all

What can be the worse that can happen?

I can handle another fall

 

So I am hopeful, and I am still smiling

Because the falls will lead to success

And I know, there will come a time

When I shall pass the test

 

 

Author's Note

The first verse was going round and round in my mind since yesterday, so I finally decided to pour out another poem. :)

Reviews

[MOON]

Indeed picking yourself up after a fall , ready to do battle eventually sheer effort wins and lessons are handy they allow the growth. Lovely write.

[Poetic Beauty]

Brushing yourself off after a dry summer dust storm. The reverence in which you overcome what life has pummeled at you is in the forefront of this piece. We learn from those hard lesson and overcome them gaining strength in the process. You write this idea and thought clearly.

[Dark and Mysterious]

A beautiful write is all i can say!!!!Keep writing!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the wisdom and the hope in the poem. I agree with your thoughts. I believe the world is small. We can find what we want sooner or later. I like the positive ending. Many tests in a life. A wise person learn from both victories and losses. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote