The Storm

The storm is finally over

And I guess I've failed the test

But I feel alright because I know

What happened is just for the best

 

And though another dream has shattered

I can always try again

Put the puzzle pieces together

In spite of all the pain

 

And there are oceans and rivers between

But I'll try to swim them all

What can be the worse that can happen?

I can handle another fall

 

So I am hopeful, and I am still smiling

Because the falls will lead to success

And I know, there will come a time

When I shall pass the test

 

 

Author's Note

The first verse was going round and round in my mind since yesterday, so I finally decided to pour out another poem. :)

Reviews

[Emrick]

beautiful message of hope.

[Danielle]

Wonderful piece of writing here!

[krish]

wwwwwwwwwooooooooewwwwwwww..........
nic=e+great+momerable+enjoyfull=well writtn.........
hey.....u know what ...common let's have lookk about my view......:--
"The storm,when it comes,it's destroy all one's home,
wanna u safe urself from this storm,pray for god,to give us a blesssing born,
coz....it's a time to play the game,wanna u hear storm horm,
every one very really known that it's bounce everyone like a popcorn,
no animal,no living /non -lliving beings'/things be escape from this thor,
we r all human-beings,so we shoul've to accept it by including in this rollllll,
r we an item's aur objects dorn,then why we take it as a destroyeddededed home,
where no one wanna to go,but everyfella gone,
so this storm make ur new home,
hey...rhea wanna u go/climb here after ur's success rome.......,
hey......every fella wanna get earn money's oorn,
so...rhea..get the path of success' stormmmmmm..............."'

[Aehr]

lol. thanks. :)
And you're view's nice too :P

[krish]

HEY..THANKS TO U TOO....
IT'S MY HONOURABLE PLEASURE......IF U DON'T MIND CAN I'VE MAKE IT FOR U STH...LET'S HAVE A LOOK NOW...........
"RHEA...RHEA...RHEA.....
U R GIFTED BY GOD'S NEW-ERA,
U HAVE A TALENT TO SHOW UR'S EVA,
SO...RHEA STEP-UP & GO AHED TO ACHEIVE A SUCCESS'S ZEALLLA....''
HAVE A NICE + LOVELY + CAHRMING =BLESSING DAY.
take - care...bye.

[Aehr]

lol. okay, thanks.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Wow! Well composed I love it

[Rhea752]

Great write Rhea! Keep it up :)

[Aehr]

thank you so much! :)

[Southern Cross]

Shows great strength and a positive outlook ...Well done

[Aehr]

wow, it's been ages since we've talked!
thanks :)

[Southern Cross]

I know I had a long absence of thoughts and feelings. Combine that with the busy Holidays and yet here I am once again. Hope all is well for you. Wishing you the very best in the new year ahead.

[Aehr]

aww.. same to you :) so, how was Christmas?

[Southern Cross]

Wonderful even though the weather is more like summer here just hot and awful.

[Aehr]

oh.. I'm sorry, but where are you now?

[Southern Cross]

I live in Miami

[Aehr]

oh... my bad! :P I'm in Dubai, an Christmas here was just another day.

[Southern Cross]

Well same here I suppose. Dubai so very very far from me. Interesting to say the least. So happy to reconnect with you again.

[Aehr]

I know, same feelings here :)

[deepblue04]

It's short and simple and i like that

[Aehr]

thanks! :)

[Flutterby aish]

nice one rhea!!!!!!!!

[Aehr]

thank you, miss! :)
missin' you all...

[Lina Grey]

determination is an excellent trait, this is an excellent poem. The only thing that seems a little off to me is
"And there are oceans and rivers between
But I'll try to swim them all
What can be the worse that can happen?
I can handle another fall"
I would change the third line, shorten it, to maybe "What's the worst that can happen?" just to keep the rhythm a little smoother i think. Just a suggestion :) great write hunny

[Aehr]

yes, thanks for the suggestion. I'll edit it as soon as I can.
and thanks :)

[Lina Grey]

no problem :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

well this is pretty good..