Summer Love

Summer Love

A Poem by Aehr

A tear on my cheek

Your hand escaping mine

The end of our summer love

In the gleaming sunshine

 

Going back to my hometown

You say that we'll keep in touch

But I've heard overseas relations

Really don't last that much

 

I really can't do much

I can just hope and pray

Just sigh and keep wishing

That we'll meet again someday

 

Maybe some other week

Maybe another chance

Maybe another dream

Maybe another dance

 

Maybe another life

Maybe some other day

Maybe another time

But I hope you come my way

 

 

© 2013 Aehr


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Aehr
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This is bitter sweet. The maybes' could have been arranged in a different order though to make it more effective (jus ma thought).

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very romantic and sad little peace. A summer love ending short and sweet. The rhyming was great, i love allot of the lines. This was a great poem i enjoyed reading it. Was defiantly worth third place in my ROMANCE contest. Job well done, keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aehr

11 Years Ago

thank you! :)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

11 Years Ago

your most welcome :)
There is a longing well expressed here, for a love not forgotten. Beautiful words written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


A beautiful poem. Always good to wish for a warm summer day and love. I like the repetition. Gave strength to the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


This piece really moved me..The form was perfect as it graduated from a day, to a week,to another life etc... I think we all have felt this emotion to a summer love knowing all the while that it would (and had to) come to an end. Yet we dream don't we? Lovely poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful one miss!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


awwe....i know how it feels....:(
thanks for sharing this wonderful piece...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aehr

11 Years Ago

thank you for reviewing it! :)
This was so beautiful! It kind of makes me think of Grease with Danny and Sandy :) Definitely captured the aspect of fleeting summer love!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aehr

11 Years Ago

thank you!
this should be a song :) I could see Taylor Swift singing this lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aehr

11 Years Ago

you're right
This is really great. I'd add some punctuation in there. Other than that this was fantastic.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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