Flamboyant Skies

Flamboyant Skies

A Poem by Aehr


A million tiny stars 

Glisten like a million diamonds

Scattered in the sky

The sky, such a flamboyant blue

The magic in the creator's hands

Who uses the sky like a canvas

To paint pictures of beauty

And to show them to the inhabitants

Of his little world

We watch in awe 

At this amazing sight

And wonder...

Can a beauty like this actually exist?

© 2012 Aehr


Author's Note

Aehr
Inspired by the picture provided. Dying to see reviews!!!

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My favorite color .. brilliant blue, or cobalt blue ..
"Who uses the heavens like a canvas" .. A wonder-full thought ..
A Master's work .. perfection .. leaving us below in awe ..

Naturally Beautiful .. Jazz

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh wow, I absolutely love this! The image your poem creates is fantastic and it describes the picture perfectly! Really, wow! I loved it!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A beautiful description of the sky. A wise person appreciate the beauty of the night. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can see what inspired you, its the flamboyant blue :)
Raining down, like shooting stars straight from the sky,
Come my review for you, with ratings high !!!

Supernatural :)
Just one suggestion (don't know if its right or wrong) : Maybe it should have been,
"The sky, such flamboyant blue"
instead of
"The sky, such a flamboyant blue"

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh wow! Even if the picture wasn't there, I could imagine this in my head. Very descriptive and A awesome poem!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


The Fallen

12 Years Ago

You are very welcome
Aehr

12 Years Ago

what do you think of the title? is it okay?
The Fallen

12 Years Ago

Yeah I thought it was very suited for the poem

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