Flamboyant Skies

Flamboyant Skies

A Poem by Aehr


A million tiny stars 

Glisten like a million diamonds

Scattered in the sky

The sky, such a flamboyant blue

The magic in the creator's hands

Who uses the sky like a canvas

To paint pictures of beauty

And to show them to the inhabitants

Of his little world

We watch in awe 

At this amazing sight

And wonder...

Can a beauty like this actually exist?

© 2012 Aehr


Author's Note

Aehr
Inspired by the picture provided. Dying to see reviews!!!

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I loved the portrayal of the sky as the Creator's canvas. It was beautiful.

I think the poem is as magical as the picture it was inspired by. Good job! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Magical beauty so elegantly expressed!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This wonderfully represents the picture. I agree with you, that picture is really beautiful and inspiring. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I have to say this is very well written!! I really love it, so serene, "the magic in the creator's hands, who uses he sky like a canvas" I love every bit. Great job!
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautifully written! I really like the line--the magic in the creator's hands, who uses he sky like a canvas. Good!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yes it does exist. You made it exist with your words in this piece.
This is magical!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Utterly beautiful you described this well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aww...i love it...the beauty of the blue hue and night sky...spectacular!

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow ...amazing write ......well done

Posted 12 Years Ago



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