Symphony of Feelings

False pretence

Forceful smiles

I've woken from a dream

Now, showing deceitful wiles

It's like time has stopped

Weird things I can't understand

My feelings, I can't control anymore

They're all like dry, slipping sand

My past coming back

All alive and awake

And now magically

My present seems to be fake

Trapped, and lost

No more words, I can say

And I never really thought

Simple words could take my breath away   

Author's Note

there's a lot going on in my mind right now. All ended up into a poem. Again.
Please review!

Reviews

[Danielle]

A lovely expression of emotion!!!

[Southern Cross]

Perfect imagery.. metaphors and similes placed so well..and a beautiful expression of emotions

[Jazique]

My present seems to be fake and simple words could take my breath away. Thats me right their, love it; just love it these are the simple words that are taking my breath away. Well done. Most of the time I'm not sure if I'm reading the readdings like this but, the words themselves. Honestly well done for not the piece but, the words that have made it.

[Captivating Ink]

The raw emotion was amazingly showed in this poem.

[LittleLover]

Beautifully wonderful, i love it a lot, definitelly going in my Favorites library. :) Great job
100/100

[deepblue04]

lol, beautiful, And it was cool at how you made it soo good XD

[MOON]

Beautifully expressed good word choice

[anxia]

Very well written, Rhea. Your writing style is very nice. Your poems always have good rhyming and sentence structuring.

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Discrete writing is a personal fav of mine ! This poem needs no force to be steered. Sometimes I really do wonder... How can u write stories and poems at the same fricking time ? That too this well ...