How Thoughts Change

Cafes remind me of coffee

Coffee reminds me of books

Books remind me of pirates

Pirates remind me of crooks

Music reminds me of feelings

Feelings remind me of hearts

Hearts remind me of love

And first-date lemon tarts

Painting reminds me of colors

Colors remind me of dreams

Dreams remind me of reality

And practicality, so it seems

Life reminds me of crying

Crying reminds me of tears

And funnily on thinking further,

Tears remind me of fears

Its strange how thoughts change

It's such a crazy transition

Thinking from one thing to another

It all creates confusion

Author's Note

It's so weird how we change our thoughts so fast. Thinking about one thing leads to thinking about another, and thinking further, we land on a totally different topic. Strange, isn't it?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you use the words. Words can mean many things. Can change with age and experience. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Balkaran Sidhu]

lyrical write.. i really enjoyed it..flwaless rhyming..nicely penned

[Zainab UF]

Yeah, the transition indeed is weird. The other day when our Zoology teacher drew a diagram of the earthworm's reproductive system, I went, "That looks like Hermes' caduceus!"

Anyway, good work! :)

[khalid]

thoughts may either become a way of life or they lose their lives. that is life!

[Belinda]

I like this. It had such a rhyming flow I could almost tilt my head side to side as a read it! Also, thoughts are so fast, I often jump topic too quickly, to the point where I have to go back and talk about the first thing I was talking about to someone. haha! its so easily to get off track when thoughts move through the mind so quickly.

[AK]

Haha, very true and very intriguing! I love your thought transitions:))
Great idea of putting them down in a poem! Keep writing!

[Cerise]

aww..your words are completely true...its jus soo weird that before we can even think of one thing properly another thing pops up...well done in expressing your point

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Confused, rather weird and surprisingly cute poem ... :)

[Ice]

This is so cool~ I never really thought of some things like this!

[Captivating Ink]

"Tears remind me of fears," Amen to that. I love all of your work. :)