Don't Leave, Please

Don't leave, please

I can't stop my tears

The bitter taste on my tongue

The awakening of fears

Don't leave, please

It hurts really bad

It's driving me crazy

It's making me go mad

Don't leave, please

You know I'll miss you

The days we spent together

Even if they were few

Don't leave, please

But I know I can't stop you

So always remember

I'll always miss you

Author's Note

My best guy friend is leaving school.. :'(

Reviews

[Captivating Ink]

I can just hear the pitiful voice one might use while saying these words. Wonderful poem :)

[Zainab UF]

Aw man, I feel your pain. My gang went our separate ways after class X and it was really hard for me to adjust in the new school without my BFFs at my side. And most of my new classmates are all about mindless gossip; no real substance in them at all. I miss the endless conversations about books I used to have with my friends.

Uh, sorry for the rant. This poem just brought back all the memories. I can totally relate with the emotions and you brought them out well. Thanks a lot for this one! :)

[Aehr]

thank you

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Pain, sadness nd loneliness......gud write

[Pax]

sweet and thoughtful...

[Ruth]

Yes, a saddening situation, indeed, felt xo

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Pain ... The sentiment is very clear in your poem.
Well done ... It's a little crude though, which obviously has its own charms... but it could have been more glossy or maybe glorified a little bit.
Still ... It hits the mark !

[AK]

Wow, Rhea! This poem is simply amazing! You expressed your emotions so well, in such simple and small words, I must say, stunning work. A writer as expressive as you is indeed a clear fit into the 'super talented' :DD

Life does have it's ups and downs, but face the downs with the bravery of a lion and leave life's mouth hanging open, haha:)

I know you can get through this, gal! Remember, everything has a reason, every cloud has a silver lining, and it is the darkest before dawn:)

Keep smiling and keep writing!

~AK

[Aehr]

you are so true AK.
And fortunately, all of it was just a huge rumor!! Thank God. again. :P

[AK]

:)
I'm happy for you!

[Cerise]

Awww..that's so touching and sweet...am sure he will miss you too..:)

[Aehr]

he won't anymore, because it was just a rumor. Thank God!

[Cerise]

oh lolz....:D..good for you

[afra]

awww sad ...i feel the same way right now ..=(