Roses On The Moon

Walking through the garden of stars

In the night sky of June

The chill in the air running down our spines

We walk down to the moon

Hand in in hand we walk 

Until we find a place

With light and shade and water too

To plant the seeds in space

We smile as we get up and see

And we look at the beautiful bloom

Our eyes are wet, of love you see

We planted roses on the moon

Author's Note

I don't know if I'm happy with this one.. What do you think?
I HAVE NO IDEA WHY I WROTE THIS ONE!!!

Reviews

[Dark Tower]

A beautiful piece, those last two stanzas finished it off amazingly.

[Captivating Ink]

Using roses and the moon as inspiration to write is beautiful. It was a really lovely poem :)

[MOON]

Walking through a garden of stars lovely line... Planted roses on the moon . Beautiful write.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

i luved dis....well m surprised why u dun hav any idea bout dis....its beautiful...the title itself is awesome

[deepblue04]

it cute and simple. it gets the point across. i really like the picture that is with the poem. it matches it well

[Ruth]

I love the image to accompany this and the poem itself is a wonderful piece...tender yet strong :) xoxo

[Aehr]

thank you. I'm still trying to figure out how and why I wrote this one.

[Ruth]

lol I like that freedom of thought tho :)

[Aehr]

maybe... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry. I enjoyed the journey. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aehr]

thank you sir... the art work is made by someone i don't know. i found it on google lol :P