Roses On The Moon

Walking through the garden of stars

In the night sky of June

The chill in the air running down our spines

We walk down to the moon

Hand in in hand we walk 

Until we find a place

With light and shade and water too

To plant the seeds in space

We smile as we get up and see

And we look at the beautiful bloom

Our eyes are wet, of love you see

We planted roses on the moon

Author's Note

I don't know if I'm happy with this one.. What do you think?
I HAVE NO IDEA WHY I WROTE THIS ONE!!!

Reviews

[Danielle]

I think its its very cool. Unique!!!!!

[Sirius King]

sweet poem :-)

[Aehr]

thank you

[Sirius King]

np :-)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Congratulations this poem has been "approved" for publication in...

THE MAGICAL MYTHICAL MYSTERY COMPENDIUM.
-Metaphysical, Mystical & Fantastical Poetry of the Arcane

By John Phoenix Hutchinson and Others. (c) 2012

Please feel free to submit other poems as you are not limited to one entry. Also please write a short "bio" about yourself and send to me via private message. This will be published along with your poem. Thanks J.P.H.

Anyone wanting to make Submissions to this Writers Cafe "e" book Project can do so on my group page, the deadline is 1st of November 2012.

[Aehr]

i've already sent you the bio.. i don't need to send it again right?
wow thank you so much!!!!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

No Rhea you dont ......this is just my standard approval message. Your very talented for a young one and these poems will add a bit of freshness into the mix.

[Aehr]

thank you so much! i can't believe that my work is going to get published! :)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Well its only an experimental "e" book but its still exciting :) and these approvals are not down to me as such.....thank all your great reviewers here on the WC

[Aehr]

:) i'm glad to be a part of it :)

[Redrascalstrawberry]

I loved the title...it's a very cut poem:)

[Aehr]

thanks

[Zainab UF]

Oh wow. This is cute, wonderful and beautiful.

[Aehr]

i still don't know why I wrote it!!!!

[Shreyas Tripathy]

You certainly have expanded the limits of love poems with this one !!!
Beautiful !!!

[Aehr]

thanks

[AK]

Nice:))))
I love the little fantasy presented in this piece.
Keep writing!

[J. J. Nightingale]

It is imagination, fantasy, and Love .. I like it ... great photo ..


Jazz

[Cerise]

AWWW...thats amazingggggg work..how can u not know...seriously wonderful..loved it..very different..:)

[Aehr]

i really don't know why i wrote this one. i just... did :P

[Celestial Witch Child]

Be very happy with it. That is all I have to say. (: