My Fairy Tale

When I think of Repunzel

I think about her hair

And that beautiful bond

She and her tresses share

When I think of Cinderella

I think about her shoe

How it lead to Prince Charming

How they found their love, so true

When I think of Snow White

I think about her face

She's the most beautiful maiden

No doubt, in any case

When I think of Belle

I think about her heart

How she turned a beast back into human

How their romance made a start

When I think of fairy tales

I think of their story-line

Happy endings, and perfect timing

So much unlike mine

My life is a fairy tale

Bittersweet, with many flaws

But I love it, yet I know

It doesn't follow fairy tale laws

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, just wow! This poem right here is so relatable and I absolutely love it! I love the description of the princesses and their stories for finding their love in each stanza. I really like the moral behind "Beauty and the Beast", because she fell in love with him even though he was a beast. That's true love, loving someone for their heart instead of their appearance. I wish most people understood that. Good job, most definitely! :)

"My life is a fairy tale
Bittersweet, with many flaws
But I love it, yet I know
It doesn't follow fairy tale laws" That stanza was an absolute perfect way to end this beautiful poem. Some people end a poem in a rather odd way, but you done it in such a majestic way. :)

Ashley Rivers-_Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Aehr]

wow.. thanks :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome :)

[anxia]

I think its lovely!!! The last stanza is what i loved the most!!!!

[Belinda]

"When I think of fairy tales
I think of their story-line
Happy endings, and perfect timing
So much unlike mine"

When I think of fairy tales, I think of bogusness. haha! I'm serious. I mean, they never go past the marriage! But of course, it wouldn't be a happy ending if it didn't end,... well happily. So good work. but honestly, a real love story with ups and downs is better than any fairy tale.

[Aehr]

yea.. i guess so. and I'm not really into a love story right now.. or maybe I am.. or maybe... - just something like that.
thanks :)

[Belinda]

HAHAH! Maybe. Thats great. You could make a whole story out of maybe. Its good to keep your options open but not really go out of your way. thats how I see it!

[afra]

Awesome ....love it

[The Fallen]

I love it!

[Leah Ciara Talisaysay]

its so cute

[Cerise]

wooow..wonderful..loved how you gave a short brief on famous tales...great