Till I Visit Again

Closed eyes

Portals to other worlds

Where I fly, where I live

Colorful skies,

Vibrant hues of water

Music as gentle as a lullaby

People from present lives and the past

Come for visits 

My eyes thirst for more

But with the break of dawn

It all fades back into darkness

I bid farewell to that land

Till I visit again

Author's Note

Something I wrote about dreams, and how I see them. Please review! :)

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

beautiful. I know I dream every night but I never remember them.

[Zainab UF]

I loved how you described dreams as portals to other worlds. For some reason, that line resonates with me. Also, the lines "people from present lives and past/Come for visits" were beautiful.

Final verdict: short, sweet, perfect! Keep dreaming :)

[Danielle]

It seems you have such lovely dreams, how I long for sweet dreams. Nice!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Congratulations this poem has been "approved" for publication in...

THE MAGICAL MYTHICAL MYSTERY COMPENDIUM.

-Fantasy and Factual Poems of the Arcane.

By John Phoenix Hutchinson and Others. (c) 2012

Please feel free to submit other poems as you are not limited to one entry. Also please write a short "bio" about yourself and send to me via private message. This will be published along with your poem. Thanks J.P.H.

Anyone wanting to make Submissions to this Writers Cafe "e" book Project can do so on my group page, the deadline is 1st of November 2012.

[Aehr]

thankyou! and what do i include in the bio?

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Just a short paragraph about you and what inspires you to write.

[Aehr]

k

[Chesney W.]

this is nice. I really honestly like this poem.... well done!!!
-Chesney Chey(:

[Balkaran Sidhu]

The land where we visit almost everyday...nd sometyms we miss it so much...good write

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Dreams !!! The land of the sub-conscious mind !!! Very well described

[Coyote Poetry]

Dreams allow us to travel to better places. I like the gentle tone of the poem and the positive ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Aehr]

thank you sir, for reviewing this piece.

[J. J. Nightingale]

I am at that time in life where dreams are more precious than waking hours .. A tear falls when I leave that place of peace .. .. Guess it is a glimpse of the other side .. ..

Calm ... I love this .. Thank you ... Jazz

[anxia]

its soothing.