Why?

Why?

A Poem by Aehr

If the government is against child labor
Then why do they give us homework?
If we finish our syllabus in school
Why do they tell us to do more work?

If a girl and a boy can be best friends
Why do adults have curious eyes?
If they say that all dreams come true one day
When they don't, why aren't they surprised?

If reading and writing are good things
Why do they call us geeks?
If trendy teenagers look awesome
Why do others call them freaks?

The word 'Why' makes me ponder
On each and every question in my head
And some of these meaningless questions
Are what you have just read 

© 2012 Aehr


Author's Note

Aehr
... NO IDEA
I wanted to write on teachers giving us home works to do, but it ended up into this :P

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Clever write words flow from an idea , who knows where it leads .

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow, this is interesting, it's quite different. but it's really good

Posted 12 Years Ago


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i like the first stanza its very clever!
about the second stanza, people do say that, but i guess it depends on the situation. if this person saw how you work hard on it then he/she will be as disappoint as you.If they saw your not working hard on it then you achieved it, then they will be surely be surprise. if they saw your now working hard on it then the look of surprise is not so evident on them...
about the third stanza. well humans are judgmental in nature...if only..
if only others think of themselves first before throwing ugly judgement.
if only they think twice before saying something.
if only they think of its effects on the person they judge.
~on the contrary be who you want to be.. dont mind others..you are what you are and nothing can change that..
and the last stanza...they are not meaningless questions..they are what you've experienced...
for me this is a thought provoking piece for almost everyone experienced this..

Posted 12 Years Ago


You start your real education when you leave school and enter the world of work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think this poem could be a little more concise. It somewhat rambles in different directions and the full point of the poem got sidetracked.
I liked the flow of the poem, however, and it is humorous in a satirical and biting way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the satirical why - 'If they say that all dreams come true one day
When they don't, why aren't they surprised?'
Only one say in that line right?
And i can imagine how frustrated that homework must have made you that you have decided to pour it in your writing :)


Posted 12 Years Ago



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