Mean Girl

You should be on Twitter

What are you doing on facebook?

You just need puppies to follow you

And do tricks for each one look

You expect me to run around

And be what I used to be

But I've stopped following you around

And I've started being the real me

You are such a big pessimist 

Can't you talk positively, just one time?

It's like not following you around

Is one's biggest crime

Your flicks, and stupid make-up

You are such a beauty freak

You love making fun of me

And calling me a geek

So you say I'm out of your group

What do you mean by that?

I'm resigning, myself

My conclusion is that

I don't care what you say

I don't care what you do 

You can go on spreading rumors

Why should I care about you?

 

Author's Note

I was very angry with a friend, who's spreading rumors about me. Like always, my emotions ended up in a poem. I've exaggerated here of course, just to add to the essence. Might not be my best, but ..... you get it, right? :P

Reviews

[quinfinn]

yes, i get it. this is an excellent way to express your stress and angst. hit 'em where it hurts....ignore them. all they want is attention. they thrive on it!!

[Aehr]

thank you for the advice, and you are so right. I really have no idea how all my emotions end up in poems. :P lol

[quinfinn]

it's a good place to put them. i have been doing it since i was 15

[Aehr]

I've been doing it since I was 12, and I'm 13 now :P lol

[quinfinn]

well, sweetheart...i'm 58 ...and my poetry never once let me down.
it pleases me to see so many young people writing and rhyming, never stop
never give up...it gets better every year

[Aehr]

i guess it does! thank you again for your amazing advice

[Ees]

Interesting poem. We all know people like that and we all let our emotions get carried away from time to time.

The last line of the first stanza confuses me. I am not sure what you were trying to say: "And do tricks at each one look"- and do tricks for each look? maybe. It might be the use of each and one that threw me off while I was reading.

"Can't you talk good, just one time?" I don't know if I like the "good" in that line. I know that you were not referring to grammar in that sentence, but it sounds a little funny.

Very well written poem you have here! Great job!
have fun,
Erin

[Aehr]

thank you. I agree with you for the errors you pointed out. I'll edit them right away. Never too old to learn, right? (Not that I really am old, just 13 :P) Thanks again. :)

[Ees]

hahaha, oh no, never to old to learn, always just right.
Great poem!

[francineeexx]

haha, I like it :) I like the rhymes as well, nice work!! :D

[Aehr]

thanks

[Belinda]

You don't need to be anyones second banana. You should be thing one always, who cares if there isn't a thing two!

[Aehr]

oh yes i should. Learnt that last year. since 5th grade till last year (7th grade) i WAS a second banana, till i realized what I was doing, slapped my head and started walking on the right track.

[Belinda]

Well good for you girlie! Cause you deserve to be first banana, you gotta make the path yourself to truely be happy, if you follow someone else's you wont ever be content.

[Aehr]

Especially when you find the other banana spreading rumors about you behind your back. (I like using banana instead of 'friend' or 'girl'. It's cute! :) :P)

[Belinda]

HAHA. thats what my grammy always says, banana.. I dunno she always told me to not be anyones 2nd banana. it just kinda stuck.

[Aehr]

i know, some things do stick. Like my mom says: When life pulls you down, get up, and show it who's boss