Last Wishes

Yesterday they were talking about last wishes

They said they are made when you’re dying

Even though I know I have a lot of time

I really didn’t mind trying

 

My first wish would be for my Mom

I just hope God keeps her fine

Let her live to the fullest, and enjoy her life

Make her life merrier than mine

 

My second wish would be for the rest of my kin

I hope they all have a joyful life

I just want them to be happy, and have a lot of fun

May they work, and play, and strife

 

My third wish would be for my partner

I hope he lives long, and he never has to weep

And all our beautiful memories

Safe and sound, he’ll keep

 

Yesterday they were talking about last wishes

They said they are made when you’re dying

Even though I know I have a lot of time

I really enjoyed trying

 

 

Reviews

[Balkaran Sidhu]

This a beautiful piece again

[Danielle]

Very nice!

[deepblue04]

I enjoy the wishes that you wrote about. Very nice

[Violet Dreams...]

Well penned

[AK]

Wow! Amazing poem! I love the air that swirls 'round this poem-so calm, eerie, pale and somehow, magical. It exposes the caring and selfless side of you, and I think it is brilliant. I loved the repitition of the first stanza as the last! Keep writing!

[MOON]

Well written thought provoking . Wishing others well . Lovely

[Soul Fire]

Good work!

[Cerise]

Woooow....very nicely written the wishes...well i have one wish for you..may all ur wishes come true..:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Wishes allow us to ponder life and the special people in a life. You had good wishes. I enjoyed the thoughts in the excellent poem.
Coyote