Rhealand

A sky full of tiny stars

And stardust falling in place of rain

Wishes and dreams come true there

I let go of my sadness and pain

The moon talks to me all night

And I listen in solemn silence

All merry and peaceful there

Not a trace of any violence

The rainbow is my slide

And the sun is my best friend

Aurora Borealis is my partner

Of happiness, there is no end

Trees whisper songs in my ears

The wind always calls my name

All flowers smile when they see me

That land is mine, I claim

So come, I'll invite you to my domain

The whole place, it's my silent lair

But please, just let it be a secret

And don't tell anyone when you're there

Author's Note

This poem is about my own land, my imagination, a place I call Rhealand. I drift away there every once in a while. Do tell me how this one was!
:)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is beautiful. I like the description. You described a beautiful and wonderful place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[anxia]

how awesome it would be if the real world was like your world?!?!? Sweet!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, Rhea I do think this is beautiful! Don't worry we all have those moments when we drift away for a time to think about our own land or places. Believe me, I do all of the time (says my parents)! Haha. I think your land is awesome, beautiful, and I'd love to live there honestly. This world we're living in lately has gone completely bizarre and abusive. Your descriptive words helped me imagine what this land might be all about. Stardust in place of rain? Wow, that's really amazing! When you mentioned there being wishes and dreams coming true, I was like "Man, I got to go to this place!" Haha. I have so many wishes and dreams that probably won't come true. But back to your poem, you done a splendid job and I hope to read more of your work in the future for sure! :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Aehr]

wow, thank you! :) that's really sweet

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Haha, you're welcome. :)

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Wow!!
I can truly imagine the place that you created !
The cover picture of this poem also helps. Free flowing poem with effortless rhyming.
No wonder this is your dreamland, this is where you belong :)

[The Fallen]

Omg. Ur own personal land sounds amazing especially the way u described it. Stardust as rain?! So coollll I would totally visit ur land

[Aehr]

:P I'd love it if you do!

[The Fallen]

Haha (:

[Violet Dreams...]

Rhealand sounds good

[Danielle]

Sounds like a great place id love to be at!!! Nice poem!

[MOON]

A trip through Rhealand sounds lovely . Great imagery.

[Cerise]

omgg...you have described it wonderfully....truly wonderful...i could jus dream it..:D....i had love to go on a trip thr if u dont mind..:P

[Aehr]

i don't!

[Cerise]

:)