The Secret of The Woods

What lies beyond those woods?

I have never been yonder

Maybe the land of fairy tales

All night I sit and wonder

I know no one who's been there

Mother says I shouldn't go

Because all rumors point to one thing

All gone are seen no more

I shall creep out of home at night

And see what the woods hide

I am not scared of witches or ghosts

I am brave enough to fight

What lies beyond those woods?

I have never been yonder

Maybe the land of fairy tales

All night I sit and wonder

Author's Note

Something I wrote in approximately three minutes - the fastest poem I've ever written.
Do review! :)

Reviews

[Remembering Love]

I loved this! I pictured a little girl staring our her window building up the courage to tip toe into the woods. Can't believe you wrote this in three minutes

[Ezekiel Silver]

Terrific poem! It easily hooks a reader in and has them dive deeper into the emotions! Excellent work!

[4$H]

Amazing... A poem like I have never read before, yet a poem with the perfect amount of devices, usage of words and phrasing. Good job :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

mystic and good rhyming

[Zainab UF]

I love the mysterious feel, the sort-of ethereal quality the words have in this poem. Good job! :)

[Aehr]

...and thankyou!

[Aditi Mahajan]

Fantasy! You must go to woods....it will be nice experience like your poem :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The woods are filled with mystery. I believe the tropical forest are the most dangerous. Never know what you may find. I like the feel of mystery and the good description in the poem. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[afra]

great write ....i enjoyed it

[Violet Dreams...]

Nice write

[MOON]

Beautiful write what lies yonder.