Unexplained Feelings

I thought you were a friend,

Now it feels like you're more

And a tiny flush of feelings

Has sprung in my heart's deep core

Now, when I look at you

I keep on staring for a while

When you say hi, and look at me

I automatically flash a smile

I wanna look good now-a-days

Whenever you're around

When you're around, I don't know why

I feel so safe and sound

I'm glad you are my friend 

Or maybe we should be more

We might be meant to be together 

But I really am not sure...

I wish I could show this to you

So that you would get to know

What's happening to me right now

I really wish I could show! 

Author's Note

..... The weirdest feeling ever!

Reviews

[Cerise]

Awww..you have tried to express a great feeling which is very hard to define but can only be understood.very nicely written.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hidden emotion leave us wishing for better things. I like the thoughts and the desire in the poem. A very nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[afra]

wow i can totally relate to this poem ....i feel this way a lot of time ....i love it ...well done

[Rhianne Ney]

Love is the very weirdest thing everyone will feel anyway... because it controls us

[Rhea752]

I feel like this right now too.... but i don't want to ruin my friendship.... oh well... this was very relate able keep writing!!!

[Aehr]

i can relate!

[Tai Ryens]

Unexplained? Balderdash; I say you've explained teenage love quite finely.

[Aehr]

lol, thanks Tai...

[Aehr]

I mean, thanks Ryan.. (silly me :P)

[Tai Ryens]

What's the difference? Hehe

[AK]

This is amazing! What I liked most about it was that I could relate to it, and it felt very true, very much like what really happens. the rhyming really made this poem outstanding:)
Keep writing!

[Aehr]

you can relate to it? seriously? (no sarcasm here, i'm just curious! :P)

[AK]

well, leave out the best friend part and place the story in history, then yes I can realate to it. The flush of feelings, the springing heart, the flashing smile, the warmed up heart, the dreaming about being together *coughs* yes, I can relate to it, but in the past tense about a person in the past.

[Aehr]

oh, so can i!

[AK]

Hehe:)

[zainul]

Wonderful write.
Enjoyed reading.

[Aehr]

thank you zainul, glad you liked it!

[zainul]

You are most welcome.
It deserves,dear friend.

[.]

Now, when I look at you
I keep on staring for a while
When you say hi, and look at me
I automatically flash a smile
I love that part it makes the poem flow. 100/100

[Aehr]

thank you! :)

[.]

you're welcome

[Dark and Mysterious]

it's great... I actually thought maybe you'd fallen for your friend and not written this hypothetically...

[Aehr]

uhh.. not really, it happened with one of my friends, so i tried to imagine myself in that situation...

[Aehr]

okay, i can't lie.. one of my friends did undergo this situation, but I did too!!!! :P Sorry for lying in the first place!