Blue

My hue is blue...

Like the open sky

Like the amazing sea

Like a butterfly on a tree

Like a ribbon on a girl's hair

Like a forget-me-not

Like the eyes of a sailor

Like the bluest moon

Like a blue rose

Like sapphire

Like the planet Neptune

So serene 

So clear 

So cold

So blue...

Reviews

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Its not complex but fresh in its purity and I like it!

[Aehr]

thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

[afra]

blue is my 4th fav color ...first if purple ...but i still love it

[Chesney W.]

it's short and simple, but that's what makes me like this poem alot. Keep on writing and don't ever forget that I, The Girl Who Stays Strong, is telling you to stay strong!(:

[Aehr]

haha... i'll stay strong, i promise.. forever and always! :P

[Summer'sBreeze]

I like this a lot, actually. I think you discribed the color well here.
And for some odd reason I found it calming.
Nicly written. :)

[Priscilla Sayers]

And what a beautiful hue blue is! Wonderful write... Blue is my favorite color!

[Aehr]

mine too! I love it!! All the shades of it.. Every shade has something different to say.. thank you, by the way.

[Priscilla Sayers]

My pleasure! And you are right, every shade of blue has a beauty of it's own:)

[Aehr]

yes it does!

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

I love it! I like how you describe the beauty of blue.
Remarkable work!
100/100

[Corset]

I think it is lovely, sometimes poems do not have to be extravagant to please, this is visually and imaginatively calming, very nicely done.

[Aehr]

thank you Corset!

[AK]

It's awesome! I loved the first line:)) You, as usual, have so much to say about little things, Rhea and that really makes you stand out! Keep writing!

[Aehr]

thank you AK, that's really sweet... :)

[AK]

Aw;)

[Aehr]

:)

[Sleeping Maiden]

Actually, i adore it! I found it really nice =) It's so sweet.. so calming to read. I love it! ~ Nicely done!

[Harley (arbiter)]

I liked it. You explained blue in many ways. Glad I could help inspire it ^_^ I like blue, its in my top 5 lol

[Aehr]

haha.. thank you again, for the inspiration and the review...

[Harley (arbiter)]

Welcome ^_^