Twilight

As the sun descends gracefully

And leaves some light to linger

And twilight comes slowly

Like a slipping ring on a finger

The sky attracts my soul

Towards the dimming light

And I am forced to wonder

And admire this beautiful sight

The clouds and the amazing sky

A beautiful contrast I see

The wind is going wild and

It's fast and wild and free

The bats flying overhead

The magic of birds' song

And I just smile because I know

This enchanting place is where I belong

Author's Note

The twilight sky is undeniably beautiful.
And today, as I gazed up at the enormous and purplish-blue sky, it inspired me to write this poem. Because, we should be happy that we belong to such beautiful place, and we should value it. This poem was inspired by the twilight sky, so I've kept the name of the poem 'Twilight'. I'm dying to see your reviews for this one!!!

Reviews

[A. V. Madison]

I totally love this! It's thought-provoking, it's unusual, and the imagery is just amazing. The words fit in together like puzzle pieces. The flow is stellar, and the rhyme scheme was selected perfectly for this topic. It makes me feel like I'm looking at the twilight sky as I read this. Undeniably perfect, Rhea. It's superb, it's beautiful, it's well-written, it's going in my library. Rating 100/100.

[Aehr]

aww.. thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it!

[A. V. Madison]

Anytime.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful description. Create a good place and vision. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[deepblue04]

wow, this is really elegant. I like that. Comparing all those things to twilight makes it very beautiful... Good job!

[Violet Dreams...]

Beautiful......

[MOON]

You expressed this beautifully good write.

[Danielle]

Wow, I absolutely love this!!! So captivating.

[Soul Fire]

Beautiful (:

[Cerise]

Wooow....its phenomenal...very sweet..exciting..cheerful...profound...intense...its like a dreamy state..very well done...i loved this poem..very nicely described the whole thing..:)

[quinfinn]

there have been hundreds of poems written abot the sky, my favorites are about the night sky....i love this one!

[afra]

wow beautiful ....i love it