A Weird Change

Our friendship is beautiful, 

Our friendship is deep

Our friendship is something 

Close to my heart, I keep

But you've changed, 

And its so different now

You don't even look at me

And I wonder how

We used to talk so much,

So much, we had fun

And I didn't even notice

When our friendship was done

And I don't know why, 

But I hate what is happening

And only when you talk to me,

Will you end this suffering

Author's Note

Something I wrote for my best guy - friend, who has changed so much, after just two months!

Reviews

[natzky]

nah-uh, that was really sad..
i can also relate with that...anyhow, maybe it's about time to ask him why he changed a lot...heheh..;)

[Jazique]

Nice, it had a good flow and I hope you and your friend work it out because even the tightest friends must face their challenges, overall it was a wonderful poem rhetorical devices, emotion, and every thing just being brought together as one poetic expression of a chance in a friend.

[darkness*star1985]

I love the photo. i have a relate to this my best friend stop talking to me. So this is close to my heart. Good work. Keep up the excellent work.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Aw;( this such a happy piece at the end that turned sad and confused. Nice work, very relatable. Well done!
God bless

[afra]

awwww ..time changes people ..people cant change time ...good job

[Owlgirl]

I know the feeling, and it's really sad. You capture it so perfectly in this poem, great job. This is amazing.

[Rhea752]

I can understand and relate to what you are writing about. this is simple yet deep. keep writing!!! :D