A Weird Change

A Weird Change

A Poem by Aehr


Our friendship is beautiful, 
Our friendship is deep
Our friendship is something 
Close to my heart, I keep

But you've changed, 
And its so different now
You don't even look at me
And I wonder how

We used to talk so much,
So much, we had fun
And I didn't even notice
When our friendship was done

And I don't know why, 
But I hate what is happening
And only when you talk to me,
Will you end this suffering

© 2012 Aehr


Author's Note

Aehr
Something I wrote for my best guy - friend, who has changed so much, after just two months!

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it is so frustrating when those close to us change and distance themselves. You captured that well in this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nicely expressed raw emotion!

Posted 11 Years Ago


excellent poem as always rhea! The rhyme was great, the flow was great, overall, wonderful! keep writing! :D
p.s.- I think I understand now! XD lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aehr

12 Years Ago

told you!
Abbie

12 Years Ago

XD
Oh gosh, I feel sorry for you. And I totally understand how you feel! one of my guy friends has changed so much, I don't even text him anymore! I love it and Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aehr

12 Years Ago

i know.. but we cleared it out and all.. so its fine now. And he's a boarder in school, so I really .. read more
Hard when we feel there is separation between our good friends. I like the hope and desire for the friendship to renew. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


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AK
Nice poem:) I can't really relate to this one(I'm still quite awkward with guys if you get what I mean) but your feelings are very well expressed. I loved it! Keep writing! And I hope things will get better for the two of you:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aehr

12 Years Ago

yes AK, I totally get what you mean...
Aehr

12 Years Ago

and thank you, everything's okay now!
AK

12 Years Ago

I'm glad it is! :)
I think many, many people can relate to this. I know I most certainly can. I certainly hope things right themselves with you and your friend. Maybe you could show him this poem? It's very well written, and I love the picture, tre cute ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


awesome piece....nice rhyming too....keep up the good work

Posted 12 Years Ago


Two companions drifting apart is a painful thing to watch, let alone experience. I do hope things go well between you two, but if not, just let the cards play themselves.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aehr

12 Years Ago

thank you Ryan. And yes, its all okay now... we cleared it out.

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