Oh Rain

Oh Rain!

How you come with those clouds

Overhead in the sky,

With a warning, 

So much unlike life.

Where things happen 

For different reasons

In all the seasons

Where things happen 

Without any warnings

And teach us lessons.

Oh Rain!

How you come with those clouds!

Author's Note

Just something I wrote.. I know, its not even good! Well? Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Rhea752]

IS TO GOOD!!! i liked it very much. i have to agree with eglantine it made me want to start talking in old English. Great write!! very inspiring!! :)

[MOON]

Very good forewarned is forearmed , does not happen nature got it right.

[eglantine]

Very proclamative (is that a word? lol) makes me want to use the word "hither" as I bound about the town

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww, i love this. =) Nice and very inspiring! ^^
Wonderful poem.

[Aehr]

thank you!

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This poem is amazing, I like how you describe about the rain coming with the clouds.
Excellent job!
100/100

[afra]

Simple but beautiful ....good job

[J. J. Nightingale]

Wisdom in so few words .. I like your style ..

Jazz :)

[Tai Ryens]

Yes, indeed it is good. Many tend to focus on the rain, not the clouds that forewarn it; you, Rhea, have done the complete opposite! Kudos to you for that, I really enjoyed this poem.

[Aehr]

thank you!