Oh Rain

Oh Rain!

How you come with those clouds

Overhead in the sky,

With a warning, 

So much unlike life.

Where things happen 

For different reasons

In all the seasons

Where things happen 

Without any warnings

And teach us lessons.

Oh Rain!

How you come with those clouds!

Author's Note

Just something I wrote.. I know, its not even good! Well? Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[deepblue04]

Aw! This is cute and simple! I like it!

[Lena Rossmore]

Really awesome ! I love rain ahah

[Aditi Mahajan]

even rain can teach us lessons...great!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Good to write of rain and life. Rainy days allow us to think. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[AK]

Awesome poem! It's raining now over here! It makes it alll the more relatable. Loved it!

[Owlgirl]

Hm. This one gave me a lot to think about. It's an intruiging poem, very well done, great job, and it is food for thought. Awesome poem :)

[Jazique]

It's okay, it rair quick, short, and to the point. Plus its reall been raingin alot of here so I can relate to the poem. Anyways nice job.

[darkness*star1985]

Well in a ways this write reads with truth, rain does come without warnings so does life. I like it. short in to the point. Good work.

[Dr. Wood ?]

I think it would be better if you dropped the line In all the seasons...it seems its been put there just because it rhymes...good poem though and it is so true that we get no black clouds in life to warn us of disasters....

[Lost in Wonderland]

Very true:) rain gives us warning as life's metaphorical storms do not. Nice concept:)