Oh Rain

Oh Rain!

How you come with those clouds

Overhead in the sky,

With a warning, 

So much unlike life.

Where things happen 

For different reasons

In all the seasons

Where things happen 

Without any warnings

And teach us lessons.

Oh Rain!

How you come with those clouds!

Author's Note

Just something I wrote.. I know, its not even good! Well? Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[smilempsn]

well I liked this.. just because of its simplicity.. and best part is it has described the rain and our thoughts so nicely.. ^-^

[TL Boehm]

I like it. Sometimes the little simple poems are the best kind

[Danielle]

I like it, actually it is quite good!!! Through writing each poem we strive to achieve greatness.

[Laura Maidah]

It's pretty cool. Personification used very well

[Summer'sBreeze]

It was like I could hear the rain. :))
Nice job, Rhea.

[Abbie]

I think it's good. not your best, but still good. keep it up rhea! :D

[Balkaran Sidhu]

No its really gud

[Reeti]

The allusion you have created with rain and life's events which incur separately is very appealing. The philosophy implied here is something we can all agree to, which forms a mystery in our individual lives. Since i really enjoyed reading this verse, i wish you could lengthen it a bit more.

[Harley (arbiter)]

I love the rain and this poem was awesome!

[reflectingus]

This is really good. I love the contrast of rain with life, how life is unpredictable, and in a way, that is good. It brings more excitement. Also, the repetition of the first two lines proved a perfect conclusion. This is flawless beauty. Well done.

[Aehr]

thank you!!!