Sometimes...

Sometimes, its hard to let go

Sometimes, its hard to go with the flow

Sometimes, its hard to do something you don't know

Sometimes, its hard to say 'no'

Sometimes, you need to rest

Sometimes, you need to be put to a test

Sometimes, you really don't have to be the best

Sometimes, you don't need to know what'll happen next

Sometimes, you have to conquer them all

Sometimes, you really have to let yourself fall

Sometimes, there is no support at all

Sometimes, you don't have anyone at your beck and call

Sometimes, you feel like you wanna die

Sometimes, you can't help but cry

Sometimes, you unwillingly have to lie

Sometimes, you have to say good bye

But they say that's life

They say that's strife

And to accept life the way it is,

Is your biggest challenge. 

Author's Note

when I read this again, it seems like a rap or something :P

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

yes this does sound like a rap song. Nice rythm to it

[Danielle]

Has a great flow, very smooth. Nice!

[Laura Maidah]

THe rhyme scheme turns me out.

[luna11]

Wow..this is a great poem. I love it.
Very well done!
x

[Amila Jay]

Very beautiful write!! Everyone and anyone can relate to this. Pretty amazing .. Love it .. Superb :))

[Layla J Omorose]

i really liked your rhyming in this poem. it was very well done and flowed very well. each linepainted a brief picture of each stage in the poem. of victory, defeat. lose, pIn, joy...etc. very good job

[Owlgirl]

Great job! I love the ending. This is a gorgeous poem, very well done.

[AK]

So many sometimes:) I loved it, it flows very well and have a characteristic ring to it. Loved it! Keep writing!

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom in your words. When we allow the strife and useless things to control our life. We become meaning less.
"And to accept life the way it is,
Is your biggest challenge. "
Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rhea752]

great message. lovely poem. written well. Keep writing!!! :)