Rage of the Gods

I

Wind is screaming loud 

Nature's everlasting war 

Howling through the night 

II 

Battle of the gods 

Lightening streaks the sky 

The angel tears fall 

III 

Water drowns the ground 

Floods the swamps, marshes, and homes

Creatures screaming loud 

IV 

Demon of the night 

Ravaging plant's fragile lives 

Killing the beauty 

V 

Sun surmounts the sky 

Creatures cautiously arrive 

Shame in the lost fight

Author's Note

Wow I guess someone pissed off the gods. :P

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

..this is more of a man vs. nature scene
...very good imagery
=]

[Jordan A. Wilson]

An epic battle indeed. Nice work.

[MOON]

lovely write and imagery.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Hmm, I never thought to write a series of haiku like this. What a great idea.

I really enjoyed reading your story here. Great word choice and flow.

[Jessica Carter]

It reminds me of old Norse epics/poems I read from time to time. Great poem. Very powerful with few words.

[Falling Leaf.]

Tells a nice story. I like it.

[Sarah W. French]

Very well written. I liked how you split up the stanzas using roman numerals. That was different and worked with the topic of the poem

[Owlgirl]

Wow! Great writing! Loved it!

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great poem!

[Tai Ryens]

Great imagery in few words, I could imagine the whole battle in my head. Well done.

ps. I apologize, for i haven't gotten around to reading your book. I will, as soon as I have more spare time.