The Mirror

mirror mirror on the wall who's the ugliest of them all

i walk up to the wicked, distorted mirror. 

my friend Amerine stands there, grimacing 

 

we both gravitate 'round our reflections 

hoping to achieve maximum perfection 

 

Amerine breaks out of the trance 

even if it only lasted a few seconds the moment struck me like a lance 

i never forgot of the mirror 

even though i always thought it a true horror 

i obsessed over looks 

while Amerine decided to read books 

i slowly got over it 

until people decided insults were in

i walk up to the wicked, distorted mirror. 

my friend Amerine stands there,laughing

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems, what do you think

Reviews

[Pikachu]

I love this! (:

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

mirrors are fascinating as is this wonderful poem........

[SuicidePact.]

Nice descriptions!

[CrimsonBlaze]

Mirrors >_> Interesting. You're really good at poems (I don't mind grammar probs) and your word choice is amazing. Love the rhyming scheme also ^( *_*)^

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

nicely expressed...liked it..thanks..keep it up.

[Cathy Wattam]

Very descriptive. I liked it.

[Alex Vidmar]

This is great. :) i love it.