Fate: Chapter One

I can see the colors. Though no-one else can. My name is Pishtar. I am the light in a world full of shadows. The flame In a dark, cold, and merciless world. I am a Fate. Though I am not a normal Fate. They noticed when I was born. A normal Fate is a grey pasty color. Their eyes should be two holes in their head. Then their is the familiar. When a Fate is born the following day at Midnight the shadows at the Gate of Errët në dritë disappear and an almost blinding light takes their place. An animal from the human world will appear. The familiar will go to their Fate and make the loudest noise they can to let the village know that their Fate is chosen. At a normal birth a bat would appear, always black. At an unusual birth, a raven would appear. This signifies that the Fate is destined for greatness, whenever this occurs the village holds a feast in honor of the Fate. My birth was very different. When I was born I had clear smooth perfectly white skin, and eyes, black, but eyes nonetheless. The village had a mind to send me away from their home forever. However the Shaman, Falltarin, the spiritual leader of the village said the prophecy was coming true.  

Drita e fshatit hijet do të jetë i lindur

Ajo do të veprojë si një hije derisa ajo vjen nga mosha

Ajo do të bini borisë

Dhe do të tymosë sherbelës

Ajo do të shtyjë nga errësira

Dhe në një botë shumë të ndryshme

Një botë që është i pafe

Deri mësimi i jetës është mësuar

Pastaj ju vetë do të vdesin

Ecni me vdekje

Ju nuk do të ecin përsëri velin nga

Ju do të shijoj jetën në fryma juaj e fundit 

It means roughly translated, 

The Light of the village of shadows will be born

She will act as a shadow until she comes of age 

She will blow the horn 

And burn the sage 

She will push you from the darkness 

And into the a very different world 

A world that is godless 

Until the lesson of Life is learned 

Then you yourself will die

Walk with Death 

You will not walk the veil by 

You will savor life in your last breath 

This scared the village even more. They knew that this occurred every 100,000 years, but tried to ignore it. The thought of having to live that which they take away terrified them. However, Falltarin's decision was made, and I would stay, because Fate, as we all well know, could not be changed. The next day The Gate of Errët në dritë unveiled my familiar at the last strike of midnight. The village went into a frenzy. This had never happened before. My familiar was a white cat. She walked through the chaos and yowled loud and long, until the village was silenced and they all stared. They were silent because they knew change was stirring in the shadows, and there was nothing they could do about it.

Author's Note

Trying something new. What do you think :P

Reviews

[Angelic_Dreamer]

Its truely something!Reminds me of something you'd see in theatres now a days, kind of like a horror movie but not so horror like....more like demontic,deep,dark,& dangerous!Great Job!xD

[TheMadnessWithin]

Very unique:) I like how you explained everything good job!

[Rhea752]

Tthank you!! :)

[Paige H]

This is very intriguing and quickly piqued my interest. I'm very excited to see what comes next!

[Rhea752]

thank you!!!! :)

[Kacie Delane Davis]

Love it! It's very interesting. i cant wait until the next installment

[Rhea752]

Thanks :D

[The Invisible Girl]

Ohhhhh! Very mysterious! I like it! :) Can't wait for the next chapter!!!! :)

[Rhea752]

Thx :)

[The Invisible Girl]

You're welcome! :)

[LapseOfMind]

Very interesting. Definitely something you should continue

[Rhea752]

Thanks :D