Life Goes On and On

Life Goes On and On

A Poem by Rhea752

The bee flew in the tree

The mouse ran in the house

The bird sings to be heard

The cat, on the pillow, sat

 

And life goes on and on

A medley of rhythm and song

Tick Tock Tick Tock

Watch the hands move on the clock

 

The end of the song

The bell goes "Dong"

As the clock struck 12

The mirror fell

 

But life goes on and on

© 2013 Rhea752


Author's Note

Rhea752
Its more of a vocal poem because of some rhythm changes. So I am sorry about that

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Ok, Rhea good night, before i go to the bed i thought to read your one writing to make my night good..:P
it seemed quite funny and i liked this and offcourse i enjoyed this, Rhea always makes me smile by her nice stuffs.
nicely written, great job once again and thanks for appreciating me by reviewing me :P on my stuff.

ok...sweet dreams "'Rhea",
good night, well sleep, you should have to read my some more new stuffs tom. :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Another great poem! :) Keep it up!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ok, Rhea good night, before i go to the bed i thought to read your one writing to make my night good..:P
it seemed quite funny and i liked this and offcourse i enjoyed this, Rhea always makes me smile by her nice stuffs.
nicely written, great job once again and thanks for appreciating me by reviewing me :P on my stuff.

ok...sweet dreams "'Rhea",
good night, well sleep, you should have to read my some more new stuffs tom. :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can definetly hear the rhythm as I read it. Nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Why apologize? Freeverse is one of the many ways of expressing yourself, and you have done just that. Glancing upon models of the Milky Way only, I am quite amazed how insignificant we are compared to the universe. Much like the beast resting gently on a pillow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rhea752

Middle Of My Daydreams, FL



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