Life

I've stayed submerged in the dark so long

With just a hint of the light

And a glimmer of song

To keep me through an endless night

A wish on the stars

Or a mass prison break

A trip up to Mars

Or a melting snowflake

Is just enough to keep me awake

But the black day is cruel

It gives and it takes

And anyone who denies it is a fool

Reviews

[Rahul]

I want every thing from my life but ffrom inner i want nothing from my life because life has already give w=everything after born human on this earth but i'm feeling very bad that every human hates now a days to each others and human wants to live alone in this life, yes, it's true we gotta live alone but why we can't live happily with some others, why we can't stop doing our bad activities, why we can't know/can't learn from our life that "life's one and we should have to hate" or life with the "HATE"...I Daily see and think about such kinda things when i went outside the home, i see everywhere cruelity and this world's teaching me some lessons to live my life and how to stay and talk with others.

life's one and death's also one, so, why we can't live at once !

This write again makes me crazy about you to read your some more writes. I don't know for/to others what you matter but, to me/for me you got something special talent and gift from heaven and you shouldn't have to stop writing. You really should have to make your some steps outside, you should have to publish your some books into a market. I don't know where you live but i know we're far from each others and if you publish yyour some books then i'd love to purchase your all books at any cost.
from anywhere.

This write again makes and raises some nice ideas in my mind and i think i don't wanna sleep and want to read your some stuffs but unfortunately i got not much time because i've have my some other subjects work but i'll read some stuffs very soon.

well penned and lovely write, you always make me refresh by your all nice and beautiful stuffs.
This's time if you'd no prob. then i love to give you my rating to/for this piece 100 / 100 :)

[Rhea752]

Thank you, sleep well, and finish your work. Lol

[Rahul]

I'm even still trying to sleep but i'm getting refresh enough and i want to log out within 5 minutes because i don't want to loose my subject work..lol
anyway, sleep well you too and awake with a new way, in a brighter way to shine over a sky like a star that i'll be one day a"superstar" (not much brighter than you, but i;ll try to shine as i'll")...lol
thanks for appreciating and well sleep.
good night :)

[Falling Leaf.]

Bounasera,

Thought provoking, a curious pondering on just what life is worth. Superb write.

Arrivederci!

[Rhea752]

Thank you ♥

[Falling Leaf.]

Always welcome love!

[ROSALIND]

I loved the flow of words and the imaginary

[Rhea752]

Thanks x)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Yes you are simply involved with the end of days:)
its clear ...and great news hey...its passed and will return after 24500 years again...
A wish on stars...a trip to mars...what beautiful lines ...and easy on the tongue to as i read ur verse aloud..
i could be a fool..
but yer real cool:)

[Rhea752]

Thx :P

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

xd

[Tai Ryens]

To envision all possibilities capable of ourselves would truly be a milestone for creativity; to see what wonders memorable and bleak we are able to perform; no matter our already present matter of life. You've firmly grasped the capabilities possible of an average human being; though I wish it were as easy as that. Well done.

[Rhea752]

Thanks:)

[Angelic_Dreamer]

Very angelic and well lifey. I liked it and once again you've managed to amuse me with your writing. I seriously don't think u've decieved me with your writing and where ur headed so far with all of your writing I doubt that'll ever happen:)

[Rhea752]

What do you mean decieve you? I is confused :(

[Angelic_Dreamer]

decieved like let me down with ur writing. Like for example me thinking it was the worst thing in the world(which I doubt seriosuly happen to u on the comments) Sorry to confuse u there but what I said was a good thing:)

[Rhea752]

Oh ok... :P thank you for the review! Izppreciate it :D

[Angelic_Dreamer]

Ur welcome:D