Dreams

The wispy dreams

Beyond my grasp

Floating in dark moonbeams

Drowned in desire

To stay there forever

The change from dark to light

Flooding my senses

I'm not going back tonight

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

There are so many ways to describe dreams, to interpret them as well. I believe you did a great job depicting the unattainable state of dreams drrampt, " to stay forever", " changing dark to light". So often we can never truly give a direct description of dreams as they are revealed to us from a place so surreal, our language does not translate but what we can comprehend. Wonderful!

[Rhea752]

Thx :)

[Priscilla Sayers]

So very welcome. One thing though, call it a challenge or better yet a request. Write in the best way you can express, the dreams that you remember most. Just as they remain in your memory, the sights, the scents, the colors, the emotion felt while dreaming them, the relief or disappointment of waking.... Just to get further into that moment of unconscious creativity that can be brought out consciously and explored in ink:).

[Rhea752]

I'll try, but if you see one, just a warning, they're usually weird

[ROSALIND]

awesome thank you for sharing

[Rhea752]

Thx :)

[Tai Ryens]

Dreams, pessimistic visions, nightmares; whatever it may be; these states of mind are intriguing and, quite unfortunate, I find myself hung about these very nightmares.

[Rhea752]

Thank you :D