The Man on the Moon

Pale light shining down 

Upon the earth's dark ground 

Starshine glowing bright 

Next to the moon's dark light

The man on the moon

Brought by a devastating typhoon 

Where a shadow is his only friend 

But there are secrets hidden 'round every bend 

Lost among the wise pearl in the sky

The man on the moon can never die 

Hidden away in the silver light 

The man on the moon stays just out of sight

When the moon is blue 

He comes down to you 

Just look in the sky one more time 

Right at the midnight chime 

And you may catch soon

A glimpse of the man on the moon

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Seems a bit forced, but finely crafted nonetheless. Either you speak of a deity watching over us, or an astronaut gone rogue that NASA refuses to speak of.

[Rhea752]

Lolzies :P Thank you

[Felecia]

Very nice! Well done! Love it!

[Rhea752]

Thanks ^.^

[Shawna]

"Lost among the wise pearl in the sky"...I love how descriptive you are in this poem. Wonderful write!

[Rhea752]

Thank you :)