Away

Away

A Poem by Rhea752

Cotton clouds

Carry me safely away

Up off the ground 

To some place I can stay

 

Blooming butterflies

Lift me into the sky

Don't make me wonder

How to fly

 

Singing seagulls

Help me soar

Hold me close

Shelter me from shore

 

Mourning moonlight

Wrap me tight

Carry me up, up, up

Away from sight

© 2012 Rhea752


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Man this is good!Thats exactly wat I thought when I read the first lines.This is very good!I liked ur word choice for some of the lines.It fits perfectly with the title.Good Job!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Angelic_Dreamer

11 Years Ago

Ur Welcome Rhea
how very pleasant and surreal. everyone wants to get away sometimes. nice job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Buongiorno,

This is surreal and lovely. Nice rhymes, rhythms, and images. Well done.

Arrivederci!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hmm, faraway subjects webbed by the similar aspect of soaring atop horizons. Lovely imagery of escape from a life.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Rhea752
Rhea752

Middle Of My Daydreams, FL



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I am a 15 year old girl who loves to read, write, act, and draw. I just started writing seriously about 2 years ago. I've been published a few times in small online magazines. I am trying to find out .. more..

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