Away
A Poem by
Rhea752
Cotton clouds
Carry me safely away
Up off the ground
To some place I can stay
Blooming butterflies
Lift me into the sky
Don't make me wonder
How to fly
Singing seagulls
Help me soar
Hold me close
Shelter me from shore
Mourning moonlight
Wrap me tight
Carry me up, up, up
Away from sight
© 2012 Rhea752
Reviews
Man this is good!Thats exactly wat I thought when I read the first lines.This is very good!I liked ur word choice for some of the lines.It fits perfectly with the title.Good Job!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you very much
11 Years Ago
Ur Welcome Rhea
how very pleasant and surreal. everyone wants to get away sometimes. nice job :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
how very pleasant and surreal. everyone wants to get away sometimes. nice job :)
Buongiorno,
This is surreal and lovely. Nice rhymes, rhythms, and images. Well done.
Arrivederci!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Buongiorno,
This is surreal and lovely. Nice rhymes, rhythms, and images. Well done.
Arrivederci!
Hmm, faraway subjects webbed by the similar aspect of soaring atop horizons. Lovely imagery of escape from a life.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Hmm, faraway subjects webbed by the similar aspect of soaring atop horizons. Lovely imagery of escape from a life.
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Added on December 25, 2012
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Rhea752 Middle Of My Daydreams, FL
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I am a 15 year old girl who loves to read, write, act, and draw. I just started writing seriously about 2 years ago. I've been published a few times in small online magazines. I am trying to find out ..
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